I am not a strong believer of peer reviews. I normally take peer reviews with a grain of salt. I realize my paper still needs work but I am concern about some of the reviews I am going to receive. I think that some people will not be very courtesty instead of reminding themselves that all our papers are work in progress. I hope that all my reviews are as courtesy as the one Karen provided to me. If you are out there Karen, thanks.

Working on this outline has been kind of a challenge making sure all the necessary information is their for a good paper. I am trying to make sure my draft flow really well. I have a few sentence that I keep moving around. Maybe, I am being to critical of myself. Well, I need to get back to working on my paper. I hope everyone is have as much fun as I am. Good Luck everyone!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope I have this blogging thing together know. I accidentally put Unit 4 blog into Unit 3 (Dah). I spent a few hours today brainstorming for my paper. I did notice I was putting ideas into clusters. During, the seminar clustering did not interest me. While I was doing the cluster, it gave me an idea of how much material I had assemblied. I will be doing more research for my paper.