Hello everyone, I hope you are having as much fun as I am. I am working on trying to improve my paper. By improving my paper, hopefully I will be improving my grade. I did notice by adding prepositions and changing some of the verbal usage my paper read more smoothly. I have rewritten a few of my sentence to give more strength and to keep the audiences attention captured. I hope I did more good than harm. Sometimes, when you second guess yourself, you can do damage. Well, I hope everyone has enjoyed this week. Good Luck!